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for The Temporal Heart

by KevinModay

person Danielle
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot so far. Good plot. ....Harry better be gay....or bi...damnit. Those two were bluntly obvious. You\'re not gunna have Harry and Oliver are you? Could go for a twist I suppose or something like that. Anywho....Keep up the good work!

~Danielle~
person romennar
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont see HOW harry and draco are gonna end up together in this story! but you're the mastermind, carry on then!
person stephb
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the story so far!! Very believable and I can't wait to see what happens!
person Ayaya
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOOOOOOO
Awesome beginning man.
Tight game, sexy fight, and OLIVER ICK!!CK!!!!!
woohoooo and since this is a DH fic, I'm assuming that Oliver is gonna get in between Harry and Draco righttttt??????
Exciting.
person Christopher Columbus
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story, loved it a bunch and it's just all around BRILLIANTLY AWESOME!!!!!!
person spinningtop
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh! i am intrigued. the quidditch game & post-game fight just crackled with intensity!
everyone was very IC, from the slytherin's "you cheated!" to the gryffindor's just-as-predictable "we don't cheat, unlike YOU!" heh.
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ooooved the harry/draco quidditch fight. cause, you know, having them pummeling each other on the quidditch pitch is hot. *cough*

wonder what role oliver shall play too, possibly in a harry side pairing hmm?
anyway, v. v. excited to see what comes next, particulary in detention! do update soon! :)

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