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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, beautiful story! Glad they are back together.
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November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bloody hell, you cannot just leave it there. It\'s wrong.
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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww, just read the story and it's great. update soon please
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is by no means horrible, though if I were you I would work a bit more on character developement and plot, trying very hard to stay away from fan fiction cliches. Other than that, I have several suggestions for you. The name is "Hermione" not "Hermoine"; you really should leave a full line of space for easier reading between your paragraphs; and I'd recommend that you get a beta to check for spelling and/or grammatical errors. It's always a sign that something needs serious editing when you misspell one of the major characters' names. This said, I certainly don't mean to discourage you from continue to write and post; keep working and you'll learn to avoid errors like those discussed above.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start! You