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BEst marrige law fic ever! I love hermoine severus pairings, but his one, its so funny how reluctantn they both are. and their first time, omg, i didnt know lemons could be so funny!

This story is amazing! It\'s keeping me on the edge of my seat (quite literally!) I am on tenterhooks to see what will happen next!

dont kill dumbledore (or if you do have it not him, maybe a pollyjuiced pettigrew and snape did it in order to get closer to voldy)

Please don\'t make Severus Snape a betrayer of Dumbledore.... or that Dumbledore dies - it can easily be done this way because they have had warning - maybe if Snape had become a traitor to the Order it was because he had to because of the Oath - and Dumbledore telling him to do it, when he was begging Severus, it wasn\'t for his life, but for Severus to kill him before his true loyalties were found.

That was my theory in the book by the way - anyway - so because of Harry\'s vision, which has already stopped Dumbledores arm being ruined, I think it should save them and warn them of the attack etc!!!

Other than that - well you\'ve already changed bits with Pansy being born from a Muggle, etc

Please don\'t kill either of those two.

Anyway, I look forward to reading however you decide to write it! But I will be keeping my fingers crossed!

well I completely understand having to redo your stories, I am having to do mine as well. But I think you\'re making a good go of it. I\'m not sure I like Harry as Half Blood Prince yet, but it is your story, and I\'m sure you\'ve thought it out. Good Job and keep it up
~Jacy

I really like this story so far! Please keep writing it! It\'s very interesting.

I love this story. I mean, you made me actually like your Ginny Character. I hate the Ginny from the original Hp, but i actually like your version, shes not a popular perfect-uh oh almost went into rant mode. anyway, i love this fic, funny sexy, and i love your narcissa! Hint for Draco\'s hell, have the DA members put him in a comprimising position with crabbe in goyle in the great halll! PLease dont let lucius get ginny, i like this story but am sincerely hoping that it will remian focused on SS/Hg and not on ginny or the others. but if you do change, it ok, i will live, and it would probably be for the best anyway, you shouldnt have to change your entire story for one hermione fan. heres some other things i like about your story-

Luna-ha ha, she surprised snapey
Snape manipulating Hermione
Hermiones character, shes funny, rude and stubborn.
The beggining were SS and HG find out about their marrige, and how you made their first sex scen beleivable, it wasn\'t full of chlihes like \"she suddenly realised how caring and sexy he was.\" BS! They tried to hex eachother which is awesome. Dumbles butt, not so much.



Ahem-wait for it-
PPPPOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSTTTTTTTT MMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEE SSSOOOOOONNN PPPLEEEAAASEEEEEE!

so you *have* moved to AFF. Well, as always I love this story, and I\'ll say to you what I\'ve said to nearly all my favourite authors today: have you finished the new book yet? Please, o please just keep writing as if none of it ever happened. None at all.

Update soon!
~Zvez

Your story is absolutely brilliant! I love it, please continue it soon. I think they should kill Malfoy, both of them actually, but that\'s just my opinion. ;)

u could always give him a taste of his own mediccen. try contacting the twins, n haveing them help the d.a. pull some monster pranks, not to mention getting a lil help elsewhere