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Ok that was fucked up but it was good. It was probably better then mine. I just post my first one. Itsl Chl Choices. It was purly fucked up but i like yous. It has that feel 2 16 year olds making... um... well it was good.

I thought this story was pretty good.

This fic needs beta-ing but I surprisingly enjoyed it a lot! Draco and Hermione getting down and dirty is always a good thing!*impish grin* Please update soon.

PS: Is this fic inspired by Draco's Bitch?

While this story could have had it's good points, I just couldn't find the strength within to actually finish it. Hermione is smarter than that, and she's bossy as hell, some people can pull off the 'oh so innocent' Hermione stuff, you can't. Your sentences are too short, and choppy. You take three different ideas and run with the dullest of them all. I'm not one to rewrite a writer, but that just plain sucked, hope you do better next time, but this one isn't making the cut for me.

Losa Lou

hmmmmmmmmm interesting i need more to think about it more i'm just a sick minded fool so dont listen to me
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Ch 1 - while he's asleep, she should destroy the pictures and movies. Maybe obliviate his memory.

Nice start...update soon