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October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I give you an A for plot, i'm hooked. The story is all there, but it's very hard to read because of all of the spelling and grammatical errors. I would suggest having someone read it over before you post it so that you can catch all of the mistakes. Keep writing and i look forward to reading the rest of the story.