rate_review Reviews

Interesting story. I found this one after enemies. I like the story so far, it's interesting and has couples I'd never thought of working being together. I'm interested in reading more. I have noticed there are some spelling errors and grammatical wrrors. For instance I think there was sense instead of since. It also seemed that you occasionally missed a word in your writing, which is easy to do since I've done it myself. If you haven't already I'd suggest getting beta, they do wonders to help make things great. :)

Chapter 6 please!!!!

Hey i loved it, i have only ever found one Harry/Lucius story that i enjoyed before (the plan) and thats one of my all time favorites. I can see this story being another favorite, please update it soon.