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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must say that when I saw the initial pairing I was very very dubious about the story. There is so much crap out there that I was wondering where you were going with that. I didn\'t expect a story of such quality, on par with The spoils of war by Aerie22.
It\'s really fun and exciting to read. The character are well described and now that you have included Tonks and Hermione (which are my prefered Harry ships) in the equation, I couldn\'t get happier. Especially since you have opened the door to an even larger pride. I can\'t wait to see Ron\'s reaction to these new developments... and the other\'s has well. Oh and Draco when he gets back to Hogwarts... I mean, he should have convinced that he had an hallucination... so the final realization should make for a, interesting read.
About this last chapter, I was surprised that Harry didn\'t discuss Tonks proposal with Dumbledore.
One point about Hermione\'s reaction :
It\'s really fun and exciting to read. The character are well described and now that you have included Tonks and Hermione (which are my prefered Harry ships) in the equation, I couldn\'t get happier. Especially since you have opened the door to an even larger pride. I can\'t wait to see Ron\'s reaction to these new developments... and the other\'s has well. Oh and Draco when he gets back to Hogwarts... I mean, he should have convinced that he had an hallucination... so the final realization should make for a, interesting read.
About this last chapter, I was surprised that Harry didn\'t discuss Tonks proposal with Dumbledore.
One point about Hermione\'s reaction :
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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you must post faster must now what happens next or use imperious curse on you and make you wright!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOPS... Im sorry I meant Chapter 8 not 7 Please come out with chapter 8 to infinity soon...
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice chapter. i enjoyed tonks\'s reasoning as well as her audition for a place within harry\'s entourage. so basically it\'s now harry potter and the family black, huh? i like how you have harry planning his actions out in advance such as the repercussions of snape\'s attitudes in class as well as how to get snape in good with tommy-boy. also, i enjoyed the binding of hermione to harry and it being a life or death issue. after her oath in the prior chapter i figured something was going to happen, but not quite so soon.
keep up the excellent work.
keep up the excellent work.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very, very interesting, and hot.
I had the feeling that Hermione would be joining the Harem, though not how you did it.
I wonder if she\'ll be asking for Servus Secus, once they explain the benefits.
You surprised me with Tonks, though.
More soon, please.
I had the feeling that Hermione would be joining the Harem, though not how you did it.
I wonder if she\'ll be asking for Servus Secus, once they explain the benefits.
You surprised me with Tonks, though.
More soon, please.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wha... you just killed it. you had it going so well, and you just destroyed the entire potential for your fic. what in the world posessed you to bring hermione into the whole harem thing? oh man... this is was one of the few HP het fics on this site that i actually bothered reading, and now... damn, dude, this is heartbreaking.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn Harry is a pimp the black sisters Tonks and Hermione how the hell is he supposed to study LOL I can
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hows Harry gonna handle all those ladies? lol... I suppose Hermione might end up asking for the spell to be cast on her too eventually... I actually expected you to bring up tonks request when Harry met with dumbledore and latter Fudge... Come out with Chapter 7 soon... actually just come out with chapter 7 to infinity soon...
Thanks
Thanks
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More chapters hurry up or ill have to put you under the imperious curse
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YO, I WANT CHAPTER SEVEN NOW! IVE BEEN WAITING FOR CHAPTER SEVEN SINCE CHAPTER 6 CAME OUT, PLZ RELEASE A MILLION CHAPTERS AT ONCE, THANY YOU, doesnt caps lock rule?