rate_review Reviews

Well, it\'s a good story, and I like the concepts, but the present tense is kinda annoying. As is the fact that you made it so very clear that you dislike Ron, and then you went and made Snape an understanding guy. He HATES Harry... I don\'t think that would just be erased by viewing a few memories. And Ron... he\'s not such a bad guy. I still don\'t understand why so many people hate him.

But, whatever. The sex scenes are good - though it\'s getting kinda boring wondering time and time again why Harry loses his temper so quickly - and I\'m hoping Tonks gets in on it.

I\'m rather hoping Hermione DOESN\'T.

Anyways, update soon.

~ Smurf

I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. I CAN\'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

This is a very good story beside the minor imperfections such as the large jump between the first two chapters and the overuse of Portkeys (that is what apparation is for). I mean in the fifth book they wouldn\'t even risk a portkey to get Harry to number 12 Grimmauld Place. I still gave five stars since this is ment to be a fan fiction and not a published book.

I particually enjoy how Narcissa and Bellatrix\'s personalities are still very simullar to how they were before the Servus Secus spell was cast on them. Even though they are in love with and submissive to Harry they are still quite vicious when interacting with others.

My wishes for future chapters.
As I wouldn\'t want to use someone else\'s ideas, I\'m going to be as vague as I possibly can with my thoughts so they\'re more loose to work with and change.
I hope this story goes into the school year as I know Narcissa and Bellatrix can realistically stay with Harry at Hogwarts, just not in the dormitories but it would be interesting to see how much of the public area\'s they\'re able to use or can be kept from and how Harry\'s life has to change to fit their needs. Also, Harry shouldn\'t kill Kreacher or more so have the option of doing it. Lastly, there shouldn\'t be any marrages to slaves or bastards taking their father\'s name but it would be weird if Bellatrix\'s son, if she gets one, is named after Sirius like Harry is named after James. Remember, since I\'m trying to be vague, every part of a suggestion help point to what I\'m trying to say.

Very, very interesting, and hot.

More soon, please.

dude, this story is the shitz, u gotta make at least 1,000 more chapters, im hooked on it. plus i love the fact that its HP not being in some gay story, god those suk ass. well, plz e-mail telling me when u think u\'ll have the next chapter done, cause im gonna cry if its 2 far away. well, cya, keep up the AWESOME work.

love the slave plot. Harry as a master, I would be his slave anyday.

Quite a story, suprised he hasn\'t knocked both of them up yet.
He should take them to an adult fetish store let them buy some vinyl outfits.

Great story, I have absolutly no complaints about it. Keep going.

This is quicky becoming my new favorite story, but I can\'t help but notice that there is alot missing in the first two chapters here compared to the first two chapters you posted at Potters Place. Is that on purpose or is my computer just screwing up?

Okay, that is AWESOME!! I can't wait for the next chr! r! Keep up the good work!! Ande see sex!