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for Bella

by EmeraldGrey

person emal7a
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you made me cry. This is such a heart-wrenching story, thus far. I just want to hold little Harry close, and tell him that everything is going to be alright. I also want to beat the s**t out of those dispicable Dursley's!!

This is a beautiful story. Keep up the good work. Hope you post another chapter soon.
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh they will have to leave his toys are Bella's or Dudley will break them! And the clothes. Oh the Dursleys aren't going to like this! I do hope they don't punish him for this! But I can't wait for chapter 3! What a lovely story!
person sak
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! A new chapter and all good stuff for Harry. I love it! And the ballet lessons were a welcome surprise!
person sweetteetwo
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM


I have read chapter's 1 and2 and i think this is one of the best h/d stories you have written and you know i love your h/d stories that you wrote before i can't wait for the next chapter. I GIVE THIS STORY SO FAR 2 THUMBS UP and i advise other's to read this story it is great so far
person sak
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your OOC Bella and how Harry views her. You draw such a stark contrast between Harry's life with the Dursleys and his time with Bella with great descriptions (the sandwiches and milk contrasts were great). I cannot wait to see where your original character fits in and to have glimpses into Draco's life.
person Vampsarecool
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok this was just so freakin cute and I cannot wait for more. *huggs*
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute start. Can't wait for chapter 2.

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