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September 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not trying to insult you, but this is really not a very good story. HG is out of character and it\'s just \"not right\".
Perhaps you should start with a short story and go from there. Plus most people (me included) hate stories where SS is involved with someone else. Yuck.
Perhaps you should start with a short story and go from there. Plus most people (me included) hate stories where SS is involved with someone else. Yuck.
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im wondering if anyone likes it
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, just noticed your fic and wanted to leave you a review.
Your chapters are a bit short ... which is too bad, because I want to know what happens next :-p
Secondly, Hermione is a bit out of character, somehow I just don\'t see her wearing an anklet and stealing a hair potion from someone. But hey, it\'s your story ... so it\'s your choice. Just be carefull that you don\'t make her a Mary Sue!
Good luck with your fic.
~Tikina~
Your chapters are a bit short ... which is too bad, because I want to know what happens next :-p
Secondly, Hermione is a bit out of character, somehow I just don\'t see her wearing an anklet and stealing a hair potion from someone. But hey, it\'s your story ... so it\'s your choice. Just be carefull that you don\'t make her a Mary Sue!
Good luck with your fic.
~Tikina~
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think it\'s a slow start, but a good one. please continue