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by laceyweasley

person amanda
schedule March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IS THIS EVER GOING TO GET UPDATED?!
person tinnidawg
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HI, I am sorry I didnt review after each chapter. I thought I would read the story first and then review. I heard about it when someone on WIKTT was looking for it, so I checked it out.
You have improved your writing as the story progressed; thats very good. You had some problems with timelines and stuff but you have managed to resolve most of it.
I would like to compliment you on a very original idea. I wouldnt personally like to be a female in that universe, but you have me intrigued as to how the story will progress. That was an awful cliffie at the end of chapter 16.
I feel it inside me that it is going to turn out HG/SS. I hope you update with the next chapter ASAP. Do not let the flamers upset you, for a first fic it is a wonderful effort. You should definitely complete it. God Bless.
Tinnidawg
person becrenee32
schedule March 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to let you know that you have me hooked on this story. It is original and I am wondering when the next part will be up. Thanks, Becky
person fran_lecter
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update! update! update! i love it!
person Suni
schedule February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Waiting, rather impatiently I must add, for an update. Things were going so well during the Christmas hols. Keep writing and post soon please.
person serpantineclaw
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever planning on continuing this after that evil cliffie? This is an amazing story, and although I have no idea why your other story was removed from aff anf I am very dissapointed, I wish you would continue this one.
person Amanda
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE THIS!!!!!!!!! It has been so long! I need more of this!
person Drow
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am waiting for more on this story i do so want to know who gets Herm in the end. Excellent writing and story.
person Gwen
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I truly have enjoyed your story and hope that you continue to post.
person Lady Eleanor
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you haven\'t forgotten about this fic. It was going along well.

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