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Yay! A new chapter! Good Lord, if Ron was my husband, I\'d be telling him to shut up during sex, too. It sucks you\'re taking a break for HBP, but I guess I\'ll be so busy reading it that I wan\'t even notice. I\'m telling you, this fiction you have here is becoming an addiction! I think I\'ll start a support group called \"Betz\'s Fiction-addiction-anon. Hee Hee. You\'re awesome. Take a bow. *Throws roses and stands up, clapping madly*

Wow...that was so sad, and frustrating. I\'ve got to think that things are going to come to a head with Ron soon. Will he go to the counseling or will he leave again? Don\'t leave us waiting too long!

Oh dear lord!. I rarely allow myself to get drawn into a fanfic this deeply, but I found it yesterday, and kept coming back to read more and more and just finished this morning!
I ADORE it!

Lovely work, imaginative and still able to keep the cannon core in place . And yes, I have to admit, Dancing Snape *slow yummy grin* is a natural delight for myself also. Frankly, a man with his grace HAS to be able to dance.

Cripes! Now, I just don\'t see Ron and Hermione recovering enough for them to even make it to their anniversary after that display. I can totally see Hermione being too tired to even function in the morning. Poor girl! What\'s the lightening from? Anything important? I do that, I clean frantically when I fight w/ hubby----not typically over pent-up sexual frustration. ;-) This may seem out of the blue, but is there going to be a new Dark Lord rising to power in your story? Just curious at the references. The safety leave the country box is smart. My mother has always told me to have a secret back account, credit card, copy of ID, & passport somewhere secure in case I ever needed it. Her comment \'better safe than sorry\'. Good chapter, the last bit was rather intense. I look forward to more, as always! ~Ginny

This has got to be one of the more bizarre stories I\'ve read ... but it managed to keep me glued to the computer all night till I caught up with you!

I will defenitely be back to see where you take this one! ^_~

Ahhhh Betz, you taunt me with your sexy updates! ;) I know you\'re just building everyone up for what to come. And I am sure it will be ever so grand!

i have enjoyed this story for the most part, but i think the pace needs to be picked up a bit. i like the mysteries that are going on, and it is entertaining. but with 31 chapters so far, i feel more should have happened by now as far as plot resolution. i rarely read fics that are longer than 20 or 25 chapters (sorry, short attention span-?), but this one has an intriguing storyline, so i\'m going to stick with it. i just wish it was moving a little faster. thanks for listening.

hi Betz,

Still loving this story. The dance lesson was very romantic - SS/HG must both have extraordinary self-control to avoid shagging after falling on the floor like that.

Miss Anne and the veg! Sev on Viagra! What can I say? I\'m off to find a cucumber and a courgette :)

Oooh. I love this story very much. Sometimes, they do seem a bit OOC... but then, I know that this situation is very different compared to the books. :D Past experiances can definatly have a huge impact on someone.

So good job! <3

I really enjoy the premise of this story and think that it\'s really well written but can we have more plot movement please?