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by LadyFlame

person lisa
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man, that was hot .. you are well named.
i cannot wait until this horrible sexual tension is resolved with some amazing harry/draco sex ..
person Hopeful Angel
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is so good!! I can\'t wait for the next one!! I mean damn!! He just wants to rape Harry!! XD Well that would be ok! ^-^ Please update soon!! Updateding now wouldn\'t be bad either!! ^-^;; Ok well you did a good job in writing this!! Really good job!! Plus the funny jokes in there. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!! UPDATE NOW PLEASE!!
Later*-*
person Broken
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa that was good! Really, I lvoe it! I love it so much that I review lol, that
person Blu
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KISS IT!
KISS IT TO MAKE IT FEEL BETTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^_______^

~Blu
person mewa
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SEXUAL TENSION ALL THE WAY!!! I hope Draco kisses it and makes it all better!!
<.< god i\'m so drunk...oh yeah HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!!!!! ^^ And may many more chapters come with the new year! ^^ WOOO!
person LupinsLover
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to say but my reviews are usually the ones that go \"I really like this story. Please keep writing.\" I mean both. I enjoy the banter that they have going and I found myself breathing a little harder as time went on. Is the jade for Harry\'s eyes?? Isn\'t jade green?? I could be mistaken. Anywho. I do like this story and can\'t wait for him to kiss it and make it better. :) YAY!!
person eden
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was just HOT!!!! I looooove the naive flushed up Harry, and poor Draco who can\'t stand it anymore... That cliffie was very evil of you, so please write more. You\'re doing a Great job!!!
person Queen mAlice
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I most defenatly like it. I only wish the chapters were a little bit longer (but I always wish that)
person Dadella
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down*

this is absolutely hilarious!!!!
I loved the banter while they were walking down to his room...

and the subtext *referring of course to \'the summer holidays\'* is really intriguing... looking forward to that \'prequal\' you mentioned...

and your writing is great! Not many people have everything down, but your style doesn\'t lack anything so far as I can tell...
and REALLY looking forward to that promised action!!

<-- is watching this story
person DuckEyedFool
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loving the story so far, keep up the good work, i\'ll look out for your other fics.

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