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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like this very much. I was hoping for another chapter right away. I know if someone burst into my room, I would be screaming bloody murder! A bike fell on me once when I was asleep ( I thought someone jumped on me) and I woke up my roommates and the landlord downstairs. I can\'t wait for you to continuis. is. Great job!
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I see nothing wrong with playing off lyrics for a fic. God knows, I am doing it with mine (LOTR). And as I have mentioned on another review, although my heart belong to Haldir the Arrogant, I find myself searching for the arrogant darkness in Snape. Great start! Please update soon!
Zee
Zee
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Started out relly good. No so Violent as some start out . I hope it is one that will be finished.
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue! Great start!
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please do continue this. I think this one shows a lot of potential and I really did enjoy the first chapter.
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oohh, I\'m on the edge of my seat. More please.....soon.
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think I\'ve reais cis chapter, and perhaps one more, somewhere else quite awhile ago. I loved it then, still loving it now. Great job. Keep up the excellent work. I enjoy the image of a blackly Dly Deatheaster mask as opposed to the popular white, hard mask found in most fics (at least the ones I\'ve read).
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I\'m so glad I stumbled across this story. Very talented writer. Keep it coming!
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April 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. If reviews are what it takes to keep you writing... :) WRITE MORE!