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May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I voted this 3/5. Now I know that doesn\'t seem like much, but believe me when I say that I vote harshly, I t I think this revised edition is MUCH better.
The parody was nice and well written, but I get the feeling this is where the story wants to go. Glad you picked up on that and changed your story accordingly.
It\'s really good, and I do want to find out what happens next. So write, write!
:)
The parody was nice and well written, but I get the feeling this is where the story wants to go. Glad you picked up on that and changed your story accordingly.
It\'s really good, and I do want to find out what happens next. So write, write!
:)