schedule
May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing a wonderful story ..I can\'t wait for others ..
schedule
May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi
Interesting story but entirely too many spelling and grammar errors - they disturb the reading immensely - please go through your fics more thoroughly before posting them.
Interesting story but entirely too many spelling and grammar errors - they disturb the reading immensely - please go through your fics more thoroughly before posting them.
schedule
May 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grammer is important but you are doing a good job writing so i\'ll forgive..
schedule
May 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to complement you on the scratching feeling dirty factor it makes the story more detailed also good writing for this chapter not that incest is good or anything but you seem to be doing this subject with alot of sentivity and care .Good luck in writing..
schedule
May 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting stuff.
schedule
May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just read son\'s pov and I can\'t wait to see what happens when daddy finds out.
schedule
May 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
How lovely! But sad, too - I think I know who the father and son are! :) I don\'t ususally like het scenes, but this one with mother as rapist was interesting for the plot. I hope that the father & son will be happily re-united as their lovemaking was very erotic & sweet.
Love & Serpents\' Kisses,
Anath.
Love & Serpents\' Kisses,
Anath.
schedule
May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
C\'mon you HAVE to add another chappie...Please do it for me....PLEASE!!!!!!!!
schedule
May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ADD MORE :d please?
schedule
May 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was good, you should keep going with it.