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by Malfoywhore

person Karena Elizabeth
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes! You are my best friend now! And if you update quickly again, I\'ll give you house points! I can\'t wait to see how she plays these two men against each other and what happens in the end! Do youo know what the ending will be or is this a fly by the seat of your pants, whaever sounds good, sort of story? Just wondering *GRIN*

Thanks,
Karena Elizabeth
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s almost like watching a sporting event. I\'ve found myself rooting for Severus, but then he\'s always been a favorite. Another chapter with more psychological twists. Really, psychological damage is far worse then physical. :-) Bravo! Please keep with the quick updates!
person sexykitten
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I swear, you truly have a gift for writing. I am in so much suspense, waiting to see what will happen next between Lucius, Snape, and Hermione. Please update quickly-- this is SO good.
person de�
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved your solution. This chapter totally made me cry:( Especially when she said \"I am nothing\". I can\'t wait for Hermione\'s POV. Now that she knows how they feel about her, I wonder what kind of plan she\'s going to come up with. Please update soon:)
person Lillyanna
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is even better than expected. I didn\'t think she would be returned to Lucius! Excellent as usual.
person MoD
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is written so well and i am just as much intrigued now as i was with the first chapter. I can\'t wait for more chapters
person Corazon
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The changing back and forth between Lucius\' and Severus\' point of view was perfect
since there was a lot of emotion happening with the near death of Hermione. I am
highly anticipating Hermione\'s \'empowerment!\' She is clearly a very strong souled
woman to have survived to so much. Your story has been amazing!

Hugs,
Corazon
person LAdy Feylene
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Been eagerly awaiting another chapter...Lucius is having some issues here, isn\'t he? Though, oddly enough, I actually feel for Draco here. I know he\'s a little bastard, but to have your own father attack you, beat you, and over what? Something that should, in your eyes, be nothing. I can imagine he\'s feeling rather betrayed and hurt right now. Odd, who I sympathize with.
person Chaos
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You end it there? *claws her face* Aie!! This is torture!is sis story is amazing! I\'m completely drawn into this *goes fangirl and squeals excitedly like her deranged self*
So what\'s gonna happen? Is he gonna give he Sev Severus? She gonna die? huh? huh? *laughs at her own weirdness*
I should stop before I get too weird.
But seriously I adore this story! You have to update soon!
What can I say? I\'m a screwy fan. ^:^\'
Keep writing (please!)
person Corazon
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey Malfoywhore!

I am still following this story. I just have not had the time to review. I is
still very amazing story. I am anxiously anticipating Severus\' reaction and
response to what Lucius has done to Hermione.

Hugs,
Corazon

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