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for Adamo Fidelitas

by pixiezombie

person Karena Elizabeth
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHy is your story getting bumped to the top when you didn\'t update the content? I wish you luck with the award, but it\'s sort of annoying to get excited one of my favorite stories is updated, but it\'s not really =(

Anyway - PLEASE UPDATE FOR REAL SOON! House points will be deducted if you 't! 't!

;)
Karena ELizabeth
person SnapeLover
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love what you\'re doing with this fic and the characters! IMO it\'s so good that you\'re keeping Draco more-or-less true to form (i.e., evil!) This was a lovely, exciting chapter... you must be having a lot of fun writing this! Congrats on the nomination, I shall certainly be voting for you. Look forward to future chapters!
person HPfreak18
schedule June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I knew someone would see them eventually. I just wonder who. Also, I think it is great that Draco is talking to Hermione.
person Elle
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the fact that you can write damn good erotica without forgetting to keep both phsical *and* emotional description. So many of these \'writers\' get urgent when writing sex scenes and concentrate only on what their imagination is conjuring at that exact moment. It makes for a very uninteresting read.

Congratulations also on keeping the variety. These stories are also at risk of becoming dull if the sex scenes are the same every time.

Oh, did I mention that I also love the storyline?!
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was freaking hot! *whew* I need to go stand in a cold shower now! And I think it was Ron who was watching!

Update soon!
Karena ELizabeth
person Bree
schedule June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on your nomination! I truly think that this is an excellent story. I cannot wait for the next chapter and I hope that you plan on keeping it updated as much as possible!!!
person Ema
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story is very good. i like reading the authors notes at the end which explain things that ppl mite not understand. keep writing
person chieri
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love the concept, and your writing style is excellent... Hope to see more of this story soon!!
person Spoonie
schedule May 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! Punch ups between Draco and Ron are always good fun haha!
person sorceress
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 was EXCELLENT!!!! I am anxiously awaiting you continuing this INCREDIBLE story!!!

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