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I see why she is named storm because trouble is awin win when she is around...

i love your story ! Especially the part with Lucius and Storm ! I Hope Storm \'ll do some nasty things to Hermione;-)
Write some more please cause this is great !

Well.
I like it a lot. But I don\'t like Storm. Actually I like her but not how she treats Hermione. I usually hate Hermione but Storm irritates me. The Mary Sue gets all is really a put off. Can\'t wait for more but holy crap, I dno if I can ret ift if I can\'t stand your main character...especially since you\'re in her head 24/7. Gave you five but we\'ll see fi my stamina can take anymore of her =P hehe

- kya

Wow. =-O I REALLY enjoyed that. I didn\'t really ex to; to; dunno what made me read it, but I just felt like I should. *shrugs* Actually, despite the fact (or maybe BECAUSE of it ;) hahaha) that Storm\'s a complete and utter slut, this is enjoyable. Maybe it\'s the forbiddenness of her lovers, or the fact that she\'ll do anyone... we don\'t have to wait around for certain characters. ;) This oughta be *interesting*, to say the least ;) rofl. I can\'t wait to read more. Please keep up the good work! :D

This story is hot! Do some more!

Good story but I just think that the sex parts came a little too quick (pardon the pun..LOL) I think if you would have had more sexual tension building up and left the sex for later that the story would have been better. I am not really complaining, just offering my advice. I love to read a good story dealing with sexual tension. I just thought the sexual acts came too quick in the story. Other than that, you did a good job!

I really enjoyed reading your fic. Lucius is different to how i usually imagine him and it was fun reading about him from a different angle. Will there be any Draco/Storm. please write some more soon.