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by Ruhgozler

person Alexis Skye
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god. that was brilliant.
person Chibs
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::Beams:: THAT WAS AWESOME!! =} really, that was a great story - and plot! i\'d honestly probably take it and make it a Draco Harry, but thats kinda like plagerism, and i dont wanna takes someone\'s idea...STOP RAMBLING. >> anyway, your story was quite original - to me anyways. i\'d never seen, heard, or read about a Master!Severus/Slave!Harry. ^^ and i was smilng my head off at the lasrt..rt... \"As a strangled cry came from Ron\'s direction, his master smirked.\" XD!!!! LOVE IT! though, i think you made Ron and the other Gryffinders SLIGHTLY, and only slightly OOC - i dont think they would ask so many pervie quest. but then agian...ah - well who cares? ITS OVER!! ....which makes me sad and happy at the same time.. o.o am i confusing anyone? ...ah well. ^^ anyways, great story, awsome plot, cool smut, and pretty god-damned writing((sorry if i\'m offending anyone!)). =} gots to go - have fun readin this really long review! =D ::waves and skips down Wonderland\'s Yellow Brick Road:: <--yes i am aware those are two dif. movies/plots..

~*Chibs
person TwistedKiwi
schedule September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH THAT WAS AMAZING! LMAO! I LOVE THE ENDING! YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITTER! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL! PLEASE? OH, SO GOOD! NEVER LOSE YOUR \"TWISTED\" SIDE!
-Kiwi
person Bee
schedule September 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh!!! Oh so kawaii!!! I loved the ending!!!!!!! ^_^
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmmmm! VERY VERY VERY nice. I like it! And the idea behind it - and all the naughtiness! Very well written - and I\'m not usually a HP/SS fan! I\'m picky, and I still think your story rocks!

- \'Da Kitten
person Oogly Spoogly
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooo I LOVE the ending!!!! You did an awesome job on this story! ^____^ i luv it i luv it i luv it
person beckytiger
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I am not usually partial to slave/master relationships, but this one was quite well written. However, I would have liked to have mor more chter ter development in it, as it seemed to happen all rather quickly. A good read, but I haven\'t been converted.
person Selena Snape
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Thats a great ending! *happy, HUGS!!*
person Selena Snape
schedule August 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh.. I\'d also say i\'d LOVE a sequel! And the ending has made me very happy. it\'s so cute!! Awww!!
person ellen
schedule August 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a lovelying ing to a wonderful story! I\'m sad it\'s over, but as aas a great read!

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