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by JesstinaMalfoy

person KrazyK
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! I can\'t wait for you to write more! It is an awsome story that really rocks
person Hanna Delacour
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Always a pleasure to give great reviews to a fic that deserves it. I am sure you are getting the readers attention. Give it time for your reviews to really build up. I think you are a talented writer, and as always I am eagerly awaiting the next installment. Keep up the great work Jess!
person Avanell
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just caught up with this marvelous tale today...can\'t wait for more! Please let draco really like her, despite some other order/goal he has. Oh, and CAN\"T wait for mother and daughter to meet :)
person Rei
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I just stumbled across this story today -- it is fabulous! Please work hard on the next chapter and make it as good as all the previous! :)
person Niala
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying this. When I think about it, I can see Hermione being the daughter of a pure-blood Slytherin (and Remus). I would suggest that you watch the typos though. They\'re a bit distracting.
person chiilkat
schedule November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
U must put me on some update list or something because this is the best fic on the whole internet. Please update soon or i might die.

oh and i really like how Draco is still a bad ass but has a heart, finally you captured both perfectly. i bow to you.
person Hanna Delacour
schedule November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That was brilliant.... I couldn\'t figure how to make the breakup between Hermione and Harry plausible, but bravo for doing it! They had a good thing going, and I didn\'t know how you could end it. BLOODY BRILLIANT! Now there is all the space and opportunity for the devilishly sexy Draco! But I do hope Harry can reconcile with Hermione, it would be too hard to break up the golden trio.... Update soon!
person who cares
schedule November 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like the story so far and i urge you to continue... but there were somethings i didn\'t like such as ur use or \"pissed off\". It\'s a good word for conversation but for writing i find that there are better adjectives like angry or annoyed something like that. other than that you have a great plot keep writing!
person Hanna Delacour
schedule November 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic! What a cliffie on that last chapter so far. The Marauder\'s Map, you have to be a slytherin! I love it! Although I must say that in this fic, I was a little sad to see Harry and Hermione falling out, and thats saying something, because I am a straight DM/HG shipper. I just don\'t want to see Hermione give up her morality. I mean she lived as a muggleborn witch at Hogwarts for five years, Oh please don\'t take her to the dark side!

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