rate_review Reviews

This is an awesome story. I know it may be wishful thinking but I hope you will continue it. I am hooked.

love the knock up joke, god!!

Please continue this!!!!!!

This is a truly funny piece, although to be fully honest, it would be much easier to read after some preliminary copy-editing. The raw form of the text takes something away from the story, which is a shame, because it\'s a good story.

INVADER ZIIIIMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!! I knew i recognized the Tacoman reference!!! RIGHT ON SISTAS!!! I love the story too by the way. LMAO TACOMAN!!! MUST OBEY THE TACOMAN!!!!!

Thanks, this chapter was really funny

This one is really good! keep it up!!!!!

Great story idea and an even greater city, one I hold dear to me. And having actually lived IN said Valley during 1996 when your fic is set I can say one thing.... there were NO Super Wal*Marts in Las Vegas, Henderson, GreenValley, N. LV, or even Summerlin until a few years later. Oh, and for those of you who lived or do live in LV.. I do know what I\'m talkin bout as a Cheyenne alumni. Go Desert Shields!

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^

this stroy is really good! hurry up and write the next chapter please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!