rate_review Reviews

Absolutely awesome story, really. You do (I\'m really not trying to be mean, honest.) need a beta on some spots. The author isn\'t as likely to catch spelling errors and akward grammar, and you might end up doubling back on your story (I know this because I\'ve done these things.) If you need a beta, just put a request in the next chapter and I\'ll send you my email address if you\'d like. Again, I really don\'t mean to be mean and I\'m not tearing your story apart because you have a fantastic writing ability, but a beta would make it even better. Anyway, please please please update soon because I rather like your story. (I\'m a sucker for Remus) ;p

No i don\'t think you\'re mean, i need criticism! thank you!!

Please review soon!! I\'m curious to see what happens to Bella. Oh, and great job on the story so far.:)