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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story started out very well. You made everything so hot and sexy and romantic at the same time. However, i have to say that the second half of the third chapter wasn\'t up to the standard you set. It ended up sounding like something a 12 year old boy would write. I really hope that the rest of the story picks up.
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes this is toomuch fun....please continue.