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for Pasicor Lex

by solisflos

person Persy
schedule August 30, 2021 at 12:00 AM

What a great story. Loved how it ended...

schedule August 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked this story. I think your writing was pretty good and I like how you went with the Marriage Law.
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person the infamous JMarie
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!! Are you going to write more?
person catpower
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a very nice story - more charming than sexy, for me. Severus got a bit soppy but he was attractive and Hermione was herself. I really enjoyed the transformation of the bathroom - imagine doing that!
person Drow
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More like 1400 something hits..... I think that u have got something good going, but it needs more..... i was wondering if u could eventually put in a part about what happens at Severus\' meetings with the dark lord? I think that this story has some possibilities, it has yet to be molded into what it can truly be, but i think u may have some idea for it- email me if u need help, i l pull ideals out of my head... ;)
person magicalwonder
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, it was well written and a wonderful concept. I hope you write more.
person Moyra
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For a short Marriage-Law-fiction that was very well done. I liked it that Hermione was in charge, and not Severus, as in most of the other stories. Cheers, M.
person Carol
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea of writing a one-shot MLC fic. I haven\'t seen many such stories. I am not sure how I felt about Snape\'s character, but I thought you generally wrote this well. I hope you keep writing and posting more stories.

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