rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I absolutely love it! PLEASE update, this looks like an extremely promising story and I can't wait to see what you come up with!!! I love the D/B even if it's only a release. And the Hr/D, whew! *fans self* "Twas HOT! Anyway, keep up the fantastic work :D

Leuce

Hmm, interesting begining. I liked the line -

is blaise draco\'s bitch? if blaise finds out whats going on will he see hermione as a threat?

Now THAT was HOTT! (Yes, with 2 Ts.) DAMN! Argh... your description, your dialogue... the construction of the story through random flashbacks... I am very impressed. Ah, and the emotions you explored, from Draco\'s inner madness and confusion, to Hermione\'s serendipitous release in the punishment... I guess my ONLY complaint would be \"not enough Blaise!\" I am hoping you will remedy that small detail, and even if you don\'t, I am STILL on my hands and knees BEGGING you to continue! The funny thing is that you have a great plot set-up here, if you decide to go with it. Then again, PWP is always nice as well. Especially when you write it like THAT! Have mercy, that was pulse-quickening. Please, please write more!

I really like this!! You should keep writing, you have a very nice technique.