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More, more, more. You must write more. It\'s getting interesting!

Don\'t you dare quit while your ahead! please? I really like where this is going and want more.

Ok, you got me curious. I can wait to find out what the magical gifts do and see the two of them meet.

Up date soon, please! ; P

An intriguing set-up to have Harry and Draco reconnect. I can see Draco as a lawyer and while Harry\'s letter was unexpected, the tone and his \"gifts\" were fun. I look forward to seeing what you do with this story. I have to confess, changing the name of Harry\'s owl is off-putting. I would recommend giving him a new owl with that name rather than renaming his snowy owl.

Please tell me you are posting more soon? This is getting interesting and one to watch.

Hi! Just wanted to tell you that I liked the first chapter so far, and I hope you\'ll continue the story, soon if possible!

Also, I\'ve a few critics to make - hope that\'s ok. I noticed that you go from Present Tense to Past Tense obliviously; it used to happen with me as well, my advice for that is choosing which tense you want to use and go along with it. You wrote many times \'starred\' and \'starring\' when you actually meant \'stared\' and \'staring\'. And, hon, even though you prefer Harry\'s owl\'s name to be \'Hedgewing\', it\'s not - this kind of action might put some of your readers off. Besides, you should try at least somehow true to the books. But then, this is just me opinion.

Draco\'s seem surprisingly IC, even though he\'s living among Muggles now. And the lawyer career really put a smile on my face - it suits him *so* much! I loved Draco\'s cat - he\'s clearly a cat person. And Travis... I might\'ve seen some attraction from him towards Draco - but I won\'t pressure into telling me or anything. But it would be lovely if Draco took Travis to his visited to Harry, don\'t you think? **hints** I\'d be very happy to see him more on the next chapters.

Summaring everything up, you did a wonderful work, despite these things I mentioned above. Keep writing more, please?

Hey, your writing\'s gorgeous. Do post more.

More! I\'m sooo curious! Why have they forced him into his bed? That poor man! What does the watch do? And the journal? Can\'t wait for more!