rate_review Reviews

Ooooooh! I like this one. Very seductive and smooth with Harry and Severus. The dog\'s death was a bit choppy, but you did warn us. Keep it coming!

I am interested in knowing what happens next. Your writing is good, mechanically, few errors, and your plot is interesting. I hope you continue.

Interesting couple of chapters. I enjoyed Harry as a gym teacher.

cdk

dedicated to me... you make me blush! Still like the story a lot and I hope there will be another up-date before three weeks have past :P
PS Stupid Stupid people in the locker room, they have no right to go around hitting people! I am outraged!!!!!!

Can I cry now??? I just cant help it, the way you ended this part is just down right wrong!!! I am soo feeling for Harry right now its not funny. But then again, who wouldnt. This is Severus we are talking about. The man is just to die for. anyway... I like your story and I would really like to read more in the near future. keep up the wonderful work. otherwise I just might cry. *grin* great job.
Spaz

It is really good. Like the \"plot\" and the way the two of them interacts. It has a nice flow, which made it nice to read. I really really hope you up date soooo... tomorror or the day after that, if I have a say in it =)