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Ease with the exclamation marks!

woohooo! i loved this story! thanks for the ending. it was great!!!!!!

Hee, I have to admit to being completely surprised he didn\'t put things together before she showed up at his chambers. I loved this. I think you should make a sequel, where everyone finds out about them, and their reactions, and of course their marriage. *g* Great job.

Too hot for mere mortals my dear. DAMN!!!!

Very Very good.

Great story so far, but I have a question. Don\'t you think that Snape would be more proactive in trying to find his mystery woman? The man is smart and if he is as possessive as you are making him out to be here, he wouldn\'t just be hanging around waiting for the call. But like I said, it\'s a great story and I do hope you update soon.

mariteri,

Are you sure you read my story? Come on read it again! And this time not for the smut! ;c) Oh what the heck read it again for the smut too! I assure you that Snape is very \"proactive\" in his search for the mystery woman! Remember all he has to work w/ are a blank picture & a short unsigned letter. In the very first paragraph of the second chapter I explain that \"each night\" he \"would study the blank photograph\" & \"read the note that came with the picture over and over in hopes of recalling that familiar neat scrawl\". I also explain a few paragraphs later that \"Already he had tried several spells on both the picture and the letter to help him identify the sender. Nothing seemed to work.\" Snape is a private man and also a smart and subtle Slytherin. He does everything short of questioning people around him to find out who this woman is. He hasn\'t done that yet because even though the writing on the letter seems familiar he has already ruled out women he knows well. He\'s pigeon holed the females around him as being undesirable or just not kinky enough to send him this picture. Instead of interogating those around him, he\'s trying spells and wracking his brain to remember meeting someone that would hint at this type of personality. The note is also very cyrptic. It doesn\'t exactly say I like you or I want you or even I\'ve been thinking about you. It says, \"Let\'s Put the X in Sex.\" that can be taken a lot of different ways and before she fire calls him he\'s thinking maybe he took the meaning of the letter and picture the wrong way. He was NOT \"hanging around waiting for the call\"! He was conveniently at home when the call came because I\'m the writer and we needed him home when she called. But he was home thinking about what to do next to figure out who she is and then feeling like he made a mistake while getting pissed. Hope this sheds some light on the story for you. ;c)

Ness,

You go! that is excelent! this is one of the more originals i\'ve come across so far. keep up the good work.

An inspired heavy talking chapter two indeed, I wonder what other sentual exploits Chapter three will reveal
Waiting impaitentlly
BrianDarksoul~

Please udpate soon.