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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy! Your writing was smooth and easy to read. I could really get into the passion because there were no distractions in the style. Would \"good job\" be a poor choice of words? lol. Seriously though, lots of fun - I\'m anxious to read more.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a steamy hot... keep it up
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, this is definitaly a hot start to the story. I can\'t wait for more. No wonder Hermione left the table before the evening mail. *g*