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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am very much enjoying your story and looking forward to the slashy goodness! Your plot is a novel idea that haven\'t seen before so it will be good to see where this leads. Your Harry is a little bit petulant, but I assume this is the \'transition\' affecting him.
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just thought i\'d let you know, i\'m really enjoying your story, and i hope you continue it. very interesting premise. I have seen a few spelling errors (mostly place names), but you could easily clear those up by haveing a decent beta look it over for you before you post.
lookign forward to your next update. =D
lookign forward to your next update. =D
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is, thankfully!, a little different from so many others. More please!! I do really like this one.
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated!!!!!!!!!! YIPPEEEEEEEEE!!!!! Thank you very much!!!!! I do like this story.
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January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoohoo! go on! i love the story!
update soooooooon, kay?
xxx
update soooooooon, kay?
xxx
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Way too many errors, such as \"Pivot Drive\" and \"Grimwald Place.\" Many others in the first chapter.
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December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start! Please update soon.
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December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far, you\'re easing into the relationship instead of blasting the readers with it. It\'s very much in character, I\'m just a bit curious as to what the spell was the Harry hit Dudley with. Will that be explained later? Overall, I can\'t wait for more :D