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February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Harry! Angsty problems for a 16-17 year old male are common. Harry turning dark would mean joining Bellatrix, Lucis, Draco, and Voldemort. These are all individuals that Harry hates. Now he could wipe out Voldemort and s DE\'s and then begin as a \'GRAY\' lord. If Hermione survives, he will stay with the light.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I BEG YOU to make him good...an evil Harry is just TOO wrong... GOOD GOOD!!!
btw, its a wonderful story. Do you have a beta, though? There are some grammar and spelling problems that I noticed. Still, the content is wonderful, and the maturity of your characters is very nice.
btw, its a wonderful story. Do you have a beta, though? There are some grammar and spelling problems that I noticed. Still, the content is wonderful, and the maturity of your characters is very nice.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi You asked about opinions weather Harry shoud be Evil or Good.
Why not make him dark but good what I mean by this is that he\'s still doing the good things he\'s normally doing just in a more permanent solution style of way...
As I said just a suggestion.
Other wise a good story you got going please continue.
Why not make him dark but good what I mean by this is that he\'s still doing the good things he\'s normally doing just in a more permanent solution style of way...
As I said just a suggestion.
Other wise a good story you got going please continue.
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wouldlove Harry to be good inthis story. I like bad harry but in my opinion it just won\'t fit this story. though that\'s only my opinion.
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February 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great and I hipe that you update soon. i can\'t wait.
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story, I have not one thing bad to say about it which is unusual seeing as though im a really tough critic. I hope there is more comming soon!
P.S.
I hope there more friction between Harry and Hermione, but there of to a good start.
P.S.
I hope there more friction between Harry and Hermione, but there of to a good start.
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going it\'s good \"Matt\". I\'ll pass word on about your story if you do the same for me.
Kallie
Kallie
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I definitely like this from the first chapter. And since it\'s HP/HG, I\'ll be eager to read it even more.
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heeey...
I read your story and it\'s kewllll
When will you update again??
I really like to know how it will continue.
Greetz and XX
Chantie
I read your story and it\'s kewllll
When will you update again??
I really like to know how it will continue.
Greetz and XX
Chantie