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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
'Oh yes you do.' Great dialogue! A re-write with lots more talk would be great.
I don't think Minerve would have been able to wait until Hermione was fifteen. Be realistic and write it with a much younger Hermione.
I don't think Minerve would have been able to wait until Hermione was fifteen. Be realistic and write it with a much younger Hermione.