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for The Homerun Blues

by Padfoot

person Bambu
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I particularly like the deft way you blend humor in with a situation that could so easily lend itself to an angst-fest. Your version of Ginny is beautifully practical and supportive, and the suggestion of a scar-shaped mound of pubic hair is particularly funny!
person Quenty
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fan-Ficcing-Tastic!!! I\'m hooked!
person genrou
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh yeah, this is going to be interesting in how its played out.
person Bambu
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I particularly like the development of Draco\'s conscience, especially as you can see the beginnings of it pinch him at the end of this chapter. You\'ve done a very nice job with escallating the situation, and Hermione\'s stream of conscious thoughts from ugh-to-right-now progress beautifully. I look forward to tomorrow\'s chapter. In fact, I keep checking for it.
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update update update soon! I love this story!!! I hope you update soon, i need something good to read!
person Cassie
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like it so far. But, then again, I really enjoy your fics.

And daily updates! I think I love you.
person Liz
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My! That was great! The whole not-wanting-to-admit-they-want-to-do-it, but having to do it thing is really hot! I\'m so glad you are updating every day because I don\'t think I could take the suspense.
person LadyMalfoy730
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... that\'s hot.. update soon!
person Jay
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is really cool. I like your plot and the pace you are using with it. I\'ll definitely continue reading and reviewing so I cant wait for the next chapter.
person captian chedder
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
fucking awesome keep up the good work mate! captain chedder awaits more of this story to be revealed !

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