rate_review Reviews

I liked the story it was very good. It wasn\'t as graphic as most of the stories posted so you\'ll prolly get a lot of people who want you to continue it, but I like it as a one shot.

Are you kidding?? This is sooo good! And I think it\'s very well written!

Now, please - please, continue!!

At least write one more chappie??? (With some smut :o)

Please!

I\'ll put your story on my favourites list, if you continue it :o)

Love Leonora.

actually its a really good first start. yes there are spelling errors, incorrect tense and a few words that werent used quite correctly, but a good beta could quickly fix that. I give you kudos for attempting to write in JKRs style (not turning Hermione into a Valley girl always gets high praise from me) and the story had a really nice sexual tension to it.. Do go on with it, it doesnt have to be an involved fic, you can turn it into a series of \'encounters\' which I think would be most interesting