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::shakes computer screen:: Must Have More!!! This was excellent!!!! I love the play between Sirius and James. 2 things tho...James was a seeker, and Sirius never played quiddich...but other then that, GREAT!

What a great and original idea for a story. You\'ve got an excellent writing style making it easy to read. Plz update.

Wow really good! Please continue.

pleeeeeeeeeease continue soon this is really good! can\'t wait to see how the bet goes! hehehe... \"little prongsie\"

holy crap that was awsome! CONTINUE!!!!!!

Good story so far!! Keep it up!!

Well, it certainly is interesting- but I hope that you don\'t let Sirius even kind of win the competition- if you even give him another chance to, I\'m sorry to say that I will not be reading this anymore- I believe that James and Lily belong together- of course, they had harry!- and only them- no little side shows to spice it up- just them, together, alone! But, it\'s still a great story and I hope you update soon and add some sex with lily and James- or should I say Lils and \"Little Prongsies\"? Sry,can\'t spell it like you did!
Have a nice day though!

hi this chapter was so funny! what a pervert Sirius is! And James too! lol

Hmm...I really like this so far. I wouldn\'t mind being your Beta if you still need one. Just email me if you are still in need. Wow, I feel very reduntant. Sorry! Anyhow, wonderous first chapter. Keep it up! You have a wonderful writing style. Sure, there are a few mistakes, but one can\'t expect perfection...Anyhow, just wanted to inform you of my delight at reading your fanficion.

Keep writing,

Chelsea

i looked at some of your other reviews and i know atleast 2 people said they would beta for you but if you still need one i\'ll be your beta. note the email if so... the first chapter was goodand i want you to update\\
thank you ;) happy writing