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for Albus's Scheme

by Acadiaelle

person Inspire
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Albus is looking more and more the likely suspect. Fun story, please update soon.
person Stormi
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could it be Albus who is the acomplice? I don\'t trust him any more.
person Drake
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great, great, story. Though I don\'t understand about Ron and Harry. Didn\'t they walk in on Severus and Hermione that once? So why are they suprised?
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are evil for leaving it there
person KK
schedule February 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update quickly!!! i love this story! i havent been a big fan of hermione/snape fics but i realli like this one. keep it up please!! can\'t wait to read the rest of the story!
Love KK
person Christy
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was a great chapter! I admit I never thought Draco was in love with Severus, I thought it was Hermione. What a great twist!!!!! This story and the plot just keep getting better and better. I do wonder what Draco thinks of his father\'s death and if he will somehow try and blame Hermione for that as well.
person magicalwonder
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This really was a great chapter. But Albus is still quite aggrevating. It should be interesting to see how Severus handles the situation with Draco. And I like the fact that Hermione does not bow to Albus. He can be an unbelievable bastard at times. I love the fact that you have Minerva calling Albus on his crap. And personally I hope before the end that Snape tells him exactly what he can do with his displeasure of his marriage. Albus is not the end all beat all, and the love of a good woman can help you move mountains. It is even easier with some extra magic, because lets face it true love is a magic all on its own. Can\'t wait to see what is next.

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person lovethelab
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really have to feel sorry for Snape - - being manipulated by Hermione like that! LOL Great chapter!
person Moi
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed this story from its beginning. I loved this chapter, not just for the lemon--and it was good!-- but for the way they are deepening their relationship, working at figuring things out. A bit of realism in the fantasy. Good work. Can\'t wait to see what\'s next.

Oh, and your reasoning behind the sudden desire to have a baby together is excellent. Consider me a skeptic convinced. (^_^)
person eve/roarke
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The one thing I love about this story is the twists and turns that you do not foresee.
I almost feel sorry for Severus just when the poor man seems to be figuring out what
to do another problem rears its ugly head.

Love the bath scene. Thank for the e.mail.

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