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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Where\'s the update? The date is the 9th February, 2005, but there is no new chapter, has something gone wrong with posting,
please correct are waiting for the update.
please correct are waiting for the update.
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February 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i got to know what was that spell for
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February 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite WIPs. Your writing is very appealing, your timing is tempting, your grammar is pretty good. I have been looking forward to updates since I stumbled across it while it was still in chapter eight.
Thank you for allowing Severus to confess, so that Hermione could confess! I thought it was just right-- his cautiousness and her boldness. The fight was delicious, and I so appreciate that you did not allow them to storm off and develop roots of bitterness, but made them face each other and fix the problem. I dislike your Albus-- he seems rather shallow to me; but your treatment of his character is at least consistent, and he\'s a pretty good foil for the hero/heroine in your rendering.
And now, if your spells are Latin-based, I\'m guessing they\'re off to make babies. Although I\'m not entirely sure why H thought she needed that just now. Severus was remarkably compliant about the whole thing. I hope you\'re planning on filling in a bit on those issues. Given your treatment of the characters and your past work, I would be surprised by anything else.
Thank you for allowing Severus to confess, so that Hermione could confess! I thought it was just right-- his cautiousness and her boldness. The fight was delicious, and I so appreciate that you did not allow them to storm off and develop roots of bitterness, but made them face each other and fix the problem. I dislike your Albus-- he seems rather shallow to me; but your treatment of his character is at least consistent, and he\'s a pretty good foil for the hero/heroine in your rendering.
And now, if your spells are Latin-based, I\'m guessing they\'re off to make babies. Although I\'m not entirely sure why H thought she needed that just now. Severus was remarkably compliant about the whole thing. I hope you\'re planning on filling in a bit on those issues. Given your treatment of the characters and your past work, I would be surprised by anything else.
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January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
if there was a favourites section here this would in it, it has funny bits and serious bitsit is wonderful, please keep going
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good cliffhanger. I enjoyed the chapter and I hope you will let us know what exactly the spell means in the next chapter. Anyway I await the next chapter, TTFN!
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January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, apart from wanting to Hex Albus Dumbledore into little pieces, its so full of twists and turns that holds
the readers interest completely.
I always look to see if you\'ve updated, this mornings coffee tasted so much better with a new chapter to read.
Do you know the song \"If I said you had a beautiful body would you hold it against me\"? well think of the tune this is a bribe.
\"If I said you were a wonderful writer, would you do a update\" did it work? I would sing it twice to get two new chapters.
Best wishes thanks for a great story.
the readers interest completely.
I always look to see if you\'ve updated, this mornings coffee tasted so much better with a new chapter to read.
Do you know the song \"If I said you had a beautiful body would you hold it against me\"? well think of the tune this is a bribe.
\"If I said you were a wonderful writer, would you do a update\" did it work? I would sing it twice to get two new chapters.
Best wishes thanks for a great story.
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January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I have probably said this before but you have soooo hit the nail on the head with the way you are writing Albus\' character. It seems like everyone writes him as some benelovant grandfather, when he appears to me as a sneak, underhand, manipulative man. Who will use anyone for anything to get what he wants. Great chapter. Can\'t wait for the next one. No rush, it is like waiting for a really good kiss. The anticipation just makes it that much sweeter.
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January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
romantic smut for my birthday, how kind of you!
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January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awsome story! I love it so far. I hope you will update again and soon. Please! I wonder how Hermione\'s parents will react to the news. I can\'t wait for you to update.
Tiffany
Tiffany
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January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Well!!! What have we here? another story about Severus and Hermione? I must say that it is quite catchy. Please keep going *claps* I await more soon I hope!!!! P.S. And what do you mean by deaths?! I hope it\'s not a war that starts is it who dies? Well I guess I can wait. Well TTFN!