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June 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
MORE!! Please please please!!
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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Aw man I wish you were still putting up stories here. Also, wish you would have made this into a multi-chaptered fic, it is such a great beginning and I think could turn into a wonderful story; especially, with you beautiful writing style.
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January 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I know you wrote this years ago but honestly I love the premise. Dumbledore not being who he seems and controlling Harry is a thought I have nurtured myself. Though it might be too late I would love it if you made this into a multi-chapter fic. You did a good job on this first chapter, keep up the good work and please start writing again.
~Fullmoon
~Fullmoon
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October 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was really neat. I liked the idea of Dumbledore keeping Harry within wards, and I loved Draco here. Wonderful job.
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August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As much as i love this story, i think it is just fine as a one-shot. just my opinion, however.
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June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Marvellous. I love this one.
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January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
woah. i loved the story, and the writing and style was great.... im new to fanfic so its a little awkawrd to me... so are you going to make it into a multi-chapter fic? or leave it? i'd love to read more.
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was good, but I don't know if it could turn into a longer fic. Basic plot was good, but didn't like what you did w/ Dumbledore (DD is NOT one who can go OOC). You should get a beta, one who knows grammar, just to fix comma mistakes, run-on sentences, etc. Liked this Draco character. The background was sort of confusing, why Harry was stuck in a room, Draco's loyalties, what Harry was doing the whole time...
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....yes totally keep this going...more, more and more!!!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it! I like it alot. I hope you do make it into a multi chapter fic. Good luck if you do.