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person gizmama
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Please update soon.
person ladyevilfaerie
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, that\'s the first chapter and I want more!!!! It is a very awesomely thought out beginning. I am very impressed! So please give me more soon!
person Lyndie578
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I can see where you are going with this, but how do you get there? Which SOB took her? A Death Eater?
person munchy
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interestinf please update....
person bubs
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please Please please please update soon! I am really enjoying this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Do you get the point?
Bubs
person Andrea
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This looks like it\'s going to be a rather lovely, disturbing story -- I\'ll wait with baited breath for the next chapter. You\'ve got nice pacing and an enjoyable writing style, I\'m sure this is going to turn out to be a nice ride indeed. And, of course, my favorite bit of the whole first chapter (not that it wasn\'t all intriguing) was of course: \"A small pack of salamanders escaped from a holding pen and set fire to a row of rosebushes, only to be found rolling happily in the flames of their destruction.\" I don\'t think I\'ve laughed so hard in a long time. Keep up the good work...or...I\'ll do something regretable, maybe.
person Nyaru
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! This sounds really interesting! I\'m totally hooked from the start. I can\'t wait to read more! I\'m adding this to my collection of \"Good Reads\". Plus... I wanna cookie too! Update soon!
person mary
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Can\'t wait to read what happens in the next chapter!
person tdk
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, You\'ve captured my attention! Helluva chapter.
person AquilaLorelei
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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Oooooooh, *interesting*! Thought at first the torturer was Severus! Possibly Lucius, then?
Anyway, suspensful first chapter so far--Am looking most forward to more!

Regards,
AquilaLorelei

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