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awwwwww! uh oh...we now have a giddy Snape on our hands. haha this is gonna be great! cant wait til the next chapter! :-) Mo

Enjoying this story very much. Please continue.

omg a girl!!!!!!! i always thought Snape should have a girl... i could see him being that overprotective dad just like mine. lol awww i hope Hermione will be happy about this! because i know i am! :-) Mo

I love the way you portrayed Snapes joy over having another child. His child. It was good how he came to Molly and Arthur. Don\'t let anyone tell you he\'s ooc. How do they know?

The facade we all have in public is different from the one we have at home.

awwwww i really hope she\'s pregnant!! that\'d be adorable... cant wait for the next update! :-) Mo

Good. I love complications in little packages. In the fictional world. In real life I\'d go screaming in the streets.

Hey! Glad I found this story again. Please keep writing it; it\'s greaat! Lots of issues and angst! -- Innogen

Joy! She\'s pregnant.

Great!

Interesting story.
I love Snape/Hermione!!! I thought i would take the time to reveiw as my story has alot of hits but only 1 reveiw and it is a bit dissapointing. :-) (mine is a true story) I look foward to see what happens next!!
Tainted Angel xxx

So far, I can see a few inconsistencies, but overall, I think you have a great story and you\'re very good at tempting your reader with juuuust enough inference to keep \'em hooked. That\'s just goooood writing -- and it\'s very difficult, building something in this format. A work in progress is a very mutable thing ... just when you hit your stride in, say, chapter 7 or 8, when it starts to take on a life of its own, you\'ll discover a key piece of \'something\' that should\'ve gone into chapter 2 or 3. But hey, that\'s what rewriting and/or flashbacks are for! 739 hits and counting CAN\'T be wrong! You\'ve got something going on here, gal! Don\'t worry -- the reviews will come! I think most people don\'t review simply because it\'s easier to \'5 star\' a piece with one mousey-click than type, \'I liked it.\' This is good! Keep going -- Ya hear me? KEEP GOING!