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i liked that. please continue.

Great! Another chapter is needed.

I think you have something that could be worthwhile. The nice thing about posting here is that you can work on it. I like your writing style, but you may want to wind some parts out. I don\'t see Hermione falling for all three passwords...maybe you could take a step back and do each as a separate chapter. I also have a hard time seeing Snape taking her viginity in such a violent way(in this story anyway). Girls wouldn\'t be bragging that it is great to shag the Prof. LOL. In anycase, I really hope you continue this, maybe from a Snape point of view or, as I mentioned, draw it out a bit. And above all, keep writing. Well done for a first attempt...hell, it was well done for many an attempt. Good luck in your next story. I will read it! :)

Not bad, keep going.

That was definately naughty!! Continue! Continue!! Loved it!

you should totally continue this. or do a sequel. either or.

continue please
can\'t just leave it off there
atleast give hermione her orgasm.
write more ok.

You did very well for your first Snape/Hermione fic. It could use a little work to spice it up but over all it was very well written and has great potential. Should you need a beta reader let me know. I do beta reading for a couple other people I know.

AGH!You have to write more!Ohh, very good original SS/HG fic.One of the best I\'ve read in a long time!Please update soon!

When I started reading fanfic, I started with SS/HG fics. They were great, I really think this one has potential to be one of them. please another chapter.

jeannette