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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is bloody awesome more and i like the hole seem to have admited it under truth serum
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giggle* Though I thought that the way that Sev was talking was a bit childish when he talked about liking Harry, especially since he hadn\'t sounded drunk when he said \"the dare stands\". A bit of inconsistency there that kinda messed with the story there. But otherwise, incredibly cute! I like that you\'ve stopped putting all the numbers on there. Lol. Great job! Keep writing!
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, but the chapters are too short. WE WANT MORE!!! It\'s nice that Draco is not a snot. I hope Harry will develop some backbone before Voldy gets his hands on him again.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The addition to the lists was excellent! Draco is a gossip? And isn\'t it a bit of the pot and kettle, him calling Harry a ponce? If I have ever seen a ponce, it\'s Draco Malfoy.
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April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! *daregasm* Hehe, it reminds me of the game of Truth or Dare at The Party, when I was sipping on my grape juice, and I hear \"SNOG MATT!!!\"... then my grape juice landed all over my shirt... *sigh* I wish they would\'ve snogged like Sev and Harry did. What chickens. Anywho, can\'t wait to read more, and sorry people are flaming you about the whole Beta-ing thing... I didn\'t know I was *that* bad. . .
*snoggyglomps*
*snoggyglomps*
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying your story, and I think your takes on the characters are quite adorable. I would, though, rewcommend that some of the stuff that you explain in your dialogue might be served better as narrative. If a character says too much, it can be awkward sometimes. But, as I said earlier, I really AM enjoying your story, and I think the list at the end is an awesome idea.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excellent! i love this story so much. i love how snape acts and how draco is trying to help snape and harry get together. cant wait till they do! ^_^
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful! I love your story so far and you must continue it as quickly as you can! I love Severus/Harry and the way you portray them and... YOU ARE EVIL FOR LEAVEING CLIFF HANGERS LIKE THAT!!! *Is done fumeing.* It was awesome.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mmwwahhahhaa... He admitted it!
Now we want some shagging! Some nice, hot, lovin\'. :D
Now we want some shagging! Some nice, hot, lovin\'. :D
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for the next chapter and their reactions it;s going to be hilareous.(sorry can\'t spell)