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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person cloverchild
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. Its different and refreshing. I found it and have been reading ever since. :) I hope you update soon!! I cant believe you left us with such a cliffie!! I cant wait to see what happens next!! Please update soon!!:):)
person o_0
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! RON!!!!!!!
person killisandra
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh i really hate you now! She found Ron! I\'m so excited..oooh please write more, pretty please write more. I\'m so happy you updated. Thank you thank you thank you. Gah, I could hug you. *hugs and gives you cookie* yay!!
person lysa1
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... first you make me cancel appointments, even stopping myself from going to this evenings Cr
person lysa1
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Haven\'t read your story for a while and was happy to discover a lot of new chapters. So I just started all over reading. This is certainly a very well written story. I like your plot so far, I like the canon Malfoys, I like that it takes place in a Voldy-won-AU. I like the desperate situation in which you have put Hermione - or rather I hate it, and as you write it, the reader (me) is definitely not in doubt that she does too.
My only problem now ( I am right in the middle of reading ch. 10 ) is that I have to leave home for a trip to Copenhagen and will be back in front of my computer very late. And I don\'t want to leave. I am trying to find a valid excuse not to go just because I want to read more! I\'d say you\'ve done a proper job capturing your readers, then?
Now on with the chapter ...
person Arabella
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... and the plot thickens!
Wonderfully done - keep writing!
x3
person gypsy
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how dare u leave off there! you mean,amazing author! plz don\'t be twice as cruel by making everyone wait on top of it all. (so happy he\'s alive by the way)
o___^v
person cdkobasiuk
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Ron\'s alive.! Great chapter. Good idea with the portkey.

cdk
person Chelsea
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love it! You are one of the most talented people i have ever had the pleasure to meet! lol. It\'s a great story and i love it. I\"m sooo happy that ron is alive!! Get to writting! Someone has to! lol
xoxo
chelsea
person K
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
QUIT WITH THE CLIFFIES YOU JERK :P Haha I wasn\'t expecting that at all! I\'d completely forgotten about Ron. Keep up the good work!

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