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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person fraser
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
arg you are so evil for leaving the cliff hanger, you are a sadistic born out of wedlock son (sorry just had to say it)
person Doneril
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. Normally I don\'t flock to AFF because I usually like lots of plot with my fiction and get queasy with the porn - but, this kind of story makes me want to come visit more often. In short, I adored reading this. I do hope that you will update soon, because your cliffhanger has me on edge. I really feel for your characters and I believe you have kept them very IC in Voldemort\'s Britain. Write on!
person Jenn
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A usaual, wonderful. I just can\'t wait for the next chapter. I love your enitre story, the plot, the twists, the tension. It is pure bliss.
person lemonade
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Of course, I love this story...but you have to know it kills me to see the updates here, and not at Ashwinder. (!!! I think you do that to torture like Snape! ;D ) I\'ll still be here when it evens out, so.... *impatient sigh* keep \'em comin, love. Can\'t wait!!
person person
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude. you rock. You are like one of the best authors I have ever read. Usually, rated um...mature fanfiction is plotless or badly forced in, but you incorporate it nicely. I tried to find you in fanfiction but yay! I saw you again here. Please write the next chapter. THank GOD you have a Beta b/c people who don\'t suck. I love the sensual scenes. Yayness. Did I already say you rock? Anyway, I love you. Don\'t stop writing.
person EsmaKeltin
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
!!!!! I was so stunned i couldn\'t even log in in for a proper signed review.
What can I say? This is... incredible! The most well-crafted, exciting and creative fanfic i believe I have ever read. And i\'ve read a lot. You have the wonderful talent of keeping your reader glued to every word. Your characterization is exquisite, the storyline itself is well-rounded and... wow.
I\'m rambling on like an idiot, I know. I could do this for paragraphs. But let me just say thank you, so much, for your creativity and wit, and for crafting this story. I await more fabulous chapters.
person Lady Jane
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please continue with this one!!! Cant\'s stand that ending :P It\'s a good story! Couldn\'t let it go once I started ^-^ I wana know the end! You really have a good language and are very good at writing! Keep up the good work! (It\'s late and I\'m not good at doing comments)

Lady Jane
person tygress
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry with the next chapter. I\'ve been so caught up with your story. Great job. Good depth and ploth and charaters. Please keep going.
person dragon34
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG\'s that was close for Hermione, a few minutes early, and Draco would\'ve seen Hermione and not Mira. I hope he doesn\'t do anything to drastic to her.
person Arabella
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, you are E V I L, Grille. Nasty little cliffhangers - I love \'em. :) Great chapter, your inspiration was evident. Keep writing! :)

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