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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Hanna Delacour
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great story, I love the plot line and the thought put into it. Please update soon!
person West FullMoon
schedule May 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please continue...! Or I might just go insane and stop functioning!!!! ...Seriously though, very good plot! Dun, dun, dun! Claud Avery is alive????? Oh no!!!! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! What could HAPPEN???? The suspense! Superb story, by the way!
person laurlauraluraluralura
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SUP @ TOTAL \"TRULY, MADLY, DEEPLY,\" MOVIE REFERENCE. ALAN RICKMAN PLAYS THE CELLO. I ORGASM. IT\'S QUITE SELF-EXPLANATORY REALLY. UM, CHAPTERUPDATEPLZ.
person Arabella
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, Grill! I swear I was searching for the \'Next Chapter\' link at the end, which is always a little disappointing when it\'s not there... But hey, it\'s worth the wait. :D Take care, and please keep writing!

~Bella
person Catpower
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed this latest chapter - of course Sev should play a musical instrument! Snape is meant to be a deep, dark fantasy man, isn\'t he? Good at music = good at sex in my book. Bach on the cello is a good choice - and, Oh yes, I can imagine how beautiful he\'d look playing it - the instrument braced between his wide open legs, his fingertips delicately pressing the fretboard, head on one side, eyes half-closed and swaying gently with the bowing motion of his right arm. Fwooar!
person Golden
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! It was brilliant once again! And I do agree with you. I can just see him playing the cello :) I like that trait of him though =9

Keep up the great work, and pleaaaaaaaaaaaaase hurry with the next chappy?
person Branwen
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Malfoy\'s a little despreate.....is he really gonna let her keep her wand....oh well it could be worse
person cdkobasiuk
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad I came back to this. It is a great story. I love your Snape and I want to know more.

cdk
person divine angel
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'ve seen Truly Madly Deeply, haven\'t you?! If not, it\'s one hell of a coincidence that you picked the exact same piece of music (and just happened to name it in such a \"subtle\" way!!) that Alan Rickman\'s character played in that. As cheesey as that was, a great chapter!
person killisandra
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you updated!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!! thank you so much. I look forward as to where this goes. thank you thank you thank you for updating......*does a jig* yipee

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