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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Kery
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, wonderful. You have me quite intruiged with this story, it\'s very good. Quite realistic, but not harshly so. I look forward to more when you can yet it to us. I\'m afraid I\'m not the best on critiquing work, so I shall refrain from doing so, and simply say that I would like to see more, once you have it that is. There is nothing worse than writer\'s block...
Best,
Kery
person NobisSolomNon
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first off, I keep spelling my name differently. Second off: OMG! I love this story! When will Sev find out Mira is Hermione???? Update soon!
person Be;;a
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter... I like the title. :) LOL, you know... I check the story page almost every day for an update-- that\'s how much I like the story so far. :)
Take care, and keep writing!
<3
person Bella
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter... I like the title. :) LOL, you know... I check the story page almost every day for an update-- that\'s how much I like the story so far. :)
Take care, and keep writing!
person Branwen
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cute story please write more
person TaintedAngel
schedule February 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello...Well it is 2:30 am here. Just got home from partying again and found a new chapter!! YAY!!! I kept checking every day. This is by far one of the most enjoyable snape/herm. fics. I have read....and I have read ALOT of them!! I am so keen to find out what happens. Keep up the good work and I hope you dot keep me hanging!! TaintedAngel xxx
person Hyarion
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OoO. I have been keeping up with this one since you first put it out and I REALLY want you to keep it going. It\'s great!! I love your work!!
person TaintedAngel
schedule January 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So I am reading your story after being out all night partying....its 4am and ahhhh....it finishes!!! I want more more more!!! :-) Yes it is safe to say I am enjoying it :-) Very interesting.
Tainted Angel xxx
person hopelsydreaming
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arg! Great story but, come on, when does Snape find out that the girl is Hermione?
person dragon34
schedule January 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh.. ihope severus figures out who mira really is, i think she needs to know everyone misses her

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