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for The Unfortunates

by Grill

person Bella
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one is as good as your first-- at least concerning the first three chapters. I can honestly say that you have me hooked, and that I cannot wait for the next chapter. Post soon- I\'m begging you. :)
person lydia
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, even though it was short :) update quickly.
person me.
schedule January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep it coming! cant wait to see where this story goes!
person ...
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, i like this. Keep it up with some more soon please.
person sandy
schedule January 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I already found the first chappie interesting and will be sure to check for updates! Please hurry up :)
person eve/roarke
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Grill, can you please update quickly, was folllowing your fanfic on Ashwinder, they changed policy I asked
for a password, they say they sent one, I have not received.

I know you have more chapters completed, please have been dying to know what happens to Hermione!
she was in a situation (saying no more) PLEASE.
person Susan
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful and original. I wasn\'t sure I was going to like it(Voldemort winning bums me out. LOL), but it really captured my attention. That and the fact that I love your stories. This one reminds me a little of an original novel titled \"No Man\'s Mistress\". Not that the heroine of that novel is still practicing her \"art\", but the prostitute with a heart of gold always grabs me. Has a bit of the Pretty Woman feel to it. This one promises to be an excellent read. I look forward to your updates. By the way, your Draco is a bit of a creep, but does not seem to be so horrible. Any chance that he will redeem himself at some point in the story? I am such a sucker for stories where he switches sides and becomes a good bad boy. LOL. Thanks so very much and sorry for the rambling review.
person dragon34
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It is still worthy. can\'t wait to read the next chapter.

jeannette
person Sam
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
like your story. it
person vblum12
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more! i want more

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