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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
htydemny
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I really like the story, but I think that you would benefit from getting a Beta, they would be able to help you with spelling mistakes, punctuation and grammar which aren\'t too great at the moment. The story has a lot of potential. Please keep writing!
I really like the story, but I think that you would benefit from getting a Beta, they would be able to help you with spelling mistakes, punctuation and grammar which aren\'t too great at the moment. The story has a lot of potential. Please keep writing!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t delete that story !!!! I ABSOLUTLY want to know what\'s coming next !!! Please !
Moonie
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Moonie
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start... Didn\'t see spelling probs. Can\'t wait to see where you go with this, only thing I ask is a little more to a chapter. Update!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its pretty okay, but then when it said that in 3rd year she called a ferret or thought it or something, i wanted to point out that he was turned into a ferret in 4th year. \'sides that, its interesting.
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sounds good so far but I need updates! This waiting more than 12 hrs isn\'t cool! lol Keep writing!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, UPDATE NOW
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good keep updating
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it so fare. looking foreward to the next chapters.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Get a beta.