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for A Birthday

by MontanaDan

person Zentiis
schedule January 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol BRILLIANT! i loved this story! he he and that little surprise at the end... ^^
person Anon
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I liked that a lot, especially the ending.
person eve/roarke
schedule January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well Montana for someone who was worried if you could write Slash o.k. in your other story (Which I love) I think I can safely say after
getting quite hot and bothered, YOU WRITE IT VERY WELL.

Please write more and a update on the other Harry/Snape partnership where Harry is far stronger a Wizard in all aspects including Potions
would go down a treat.

Really good writing, thank you
person Angel
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s your birthday!!! Ohhh I love that! I didn\'t see that coming at all. It was hot, steaming, loving... *sighs*
person Luna Riddle
schedule January 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i know this is HP, but LOTR came ot mind cause for hobbits the person who has the birthday gives presents instead of receiving....but i did like this, short and sweet ;)
person Squall-sama
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*dies* That was great! I did NOT expect that! *glomps* Love it!
person Akitso
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh, ironic, I like it.
Delicious
person freewater
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahaha, that was good, I especially liked the end ^_^ Made me laugh, great work!

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